Aw, this was fairly sweet. I'd like to see more stories in the LoL'verse. (LMAO I love that...lol verse... yeah). I do have a fondness for Kim and Bonnie pairings as far as the lesbian/bi couples go.

I've read it a long time ago, so I guess I got to apology for having taken so long to review. It's just that I wasn't sure how to, and as a matter of fact, I'm still not. But well, let's see how this works out.

M... for starting, I kinda liked the settling, with Kim and Bonnie as "rommies" at college and well, this can bring out some many ideas that I'm definitly using some for the KP Project I'm planing nowadays.

Kim's reaction was quite interesting, confusing the reader about how much she might dislike the idea, but even better was Bonnie's. It was truly great, yush, I can totally see it happening like that. Pretty good work there ;)

Now, there's two downsides I got to point out here.
The first one ain't so serious, it's just that I felt like the introduction was kinda boring and/or hard to follow with very little dinamic, and it kinda felt as a relief when the story reached the dialogs.

Now, the part of all this that I really just couldn't buy were some things about Bonnie's story. Cause really... ALWAYS an act? This, I just can't see happening, specially considering Bonnie is more likely the kind of person to speak out her mind rather than pretending to be something else (Except when she's planing to do something bad). All right, it was plausible when she said she had a boyfriend (Brick) so that no one would suspect something about her, and the thing about Josh wasn't bad either, but then, all the events of "Homecoming Upset" as an act? I can't really buy it. I think it would have been more credible if you'd put she actually liked Junior (a bit) and wanted to try out dating him to see if, that way, she could forget about Kim, something that clearly didn't work.

But well, the last part was really sweet with the girls having their differents doubts and concerns, and I must say that, just like my KiBo, this fic clearly has potential to go on, something you should do if you'd think of a plot (How does Kim and Bonnie fighting against The Mistress sounds? XD), even more, I already got how you can start next chapter: Kim waking up to find herself and Bonnie naked, their clothes torn apart, their bodies biten all over and with a big headache that's bringing uhm... complex memories of last night. ^^U

Oh, well. Loved the fic anyway! Thanks for writting it! ;)

great story, i enjoyed reading it.

please make some more chapters

Aah.. The old drunken lesbian experiment. There's a time and place for everything, and it's called College.

Loved it. It was cute, romantic, and believably done. All hotness issues aside, they could make a good couple. They could get into some epic fights, though (which would be followed by earth-shattering making up).

great story with a great pairing

Interesting start. Having them jump into bed at the end, but not. Kind of sweet.

If you continue this AU - Hopefully Bonnie won't lose her 'bite' or suddenly go soft on Kim. One of the attractions of reading KiBo (or even KiGo) is the tension and conflict of two strong characters trying to become a couple and still retaining that tension. A suddenly nice Bonnie won't really be Bonnie, IMHO.

Looking forward to more stories in this AU.

Oh well I suppose it could be worse. It could be Shego.
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That is the best phrase I have ever read in a story. I could not stop laughing. It was just so captivating!

Really good job on including the new season 4 stuff, and I just could believe Bonnie would have been puting on an act all those years. I'm one of those guys who thinks Bonnie is a good guy after all.

Mike

no!! you can't end it there! Well, you can, but i'd love it if you didn't great story...i give two thumbs!

OMG!!, that has to be the best kim/bonnie story i have ever read. please, please, please, keep this going.

More.

You better make more. :)

I like this story. A lot. I've always said Kibo was the most plausible pairing next to Kigo, and this one-shot illustrates (quite elegantly, I might add) why. At first I thought things were moving WAY too fast, but you surprised me. You didn't make Kim fall for Bonnie right away. Kim had a plausible reaction to the confession, and the whole thing was very cute without being sappy.

Also, you seem to have curbed your spelling and grammar problems somewhat, which is greatly appreciated.

Overall, a solid 8/10. I knocked a couple of points off because this is a one-shot, and I wanted more. When you write another story in this universe, add two points back to that score. You'll get a 10/10 at that point. Because I needs me some more of this.

Good on ya, mate!

Interesting, are you going to continue with this universe, or is it a one-shot?

That was good. I found it quite amusing with Kim's reaction to her own reactions there at the end. It moved quite nicely and was pretty entertaining as well. Though, I can't really think of all too much to comment on, so I'll just leave it at that. Anyway, thanks for posting it. ^_^

Wow a Kim/Bonnie romamce, never actually read this pairing before because it seemed unrealistic but hell there ARE Kim/Shego fan fic so who am I to complain?

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

KIGO TRAITOR!! BETRAYAL!! BLASPHE... *cough* Oh Heck, it's a righteous little story, and no mistake. I'm become quite the Bon-Bon fan over the past year and don't mind a spot of KimBon to spice up my day! Good work, won't mind more of the same but I won't hold you to it.