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| shiftyless 2008-10-06 ch 15,  | abuseVery neat. |
| La Mariane 2008-10-05 ch 45, | abusethis chapter was really interesting! Poor Harry, and poor Snape too. I'm sure Harry's suspitions will make protecting Harry even more difficult... I hope Harry finds out the truth soon... Update soon please |
| Athena 2008-10-05 ch 45, anon. | abusewhat a story so far! i am really looking forward to the next installment of this. Well done for winning the best chemistry award and i look forward to reading some of your other stories. |
| Xenonwing 2008-10-05 ch 45, | abuseI wondered how Harry would be suspicious of Snape in this story like he did in the book, but I guess I got my answer. And since Snape was the only adult Harry ever trusted in this story, he was even more shocked. I loved it. Although I have a question: How old is the Bloody Baron? 100 years or 10 years? Because I'm pretty sure you mentioned here somewhere that the Baron knew Salazar, but he lived a 10 years ago. I'm also pretty sure you said Baron was a 100 years old. Please elaborate. Update soon. - Xenonwing |
| jimmy-barnes-13 2008-10-04 ch 45, | abuseOh its all happening now, really good chapter :) Love Harry's friendships in this one ^^ |
| The Blind Apprentice 2008-10-04 ch 45, | abuseHey, I just finished reading up to what you've got so far. I'm definitly enjoying this story. I do see some commonality between this and Whelp and Whelp II... well sorta. Just thought I'd give you a big thumbs-up for an awesome chappie! TBA |
| ObsidianEbony 2008-10-04 ch 45, | abuseI love reading Slytherin!Harry, but this one was just amazing! I hope Harry soon realizes that Snape isn't evil. Snape may be a git at times, but I think that inside, he's still that little boy who wanted to be friends with Lily. Update soon XD! |
| mandy-san 2008-10-04 ch 45, | abuse-stares at amount of review- O |
| mandy-san 2008-10-04 ch 31, | abuseomigod! pepperming mocha! -pounce- (even though is october right now >>) nice job on the character development, by the way. love it!! |
| Nights Silhouette 2008-10-04 ch 45, | abuseAn alright chapter, keep it up. |
| Itallia 2008-10-03 ch 45, | abuseAh...I should have seen something like this coming. Of course Harry would find some way to distrust Snape. |
| godsdaughter77 2008-10-03 ch 45, | abuseAbsolutely amazing chapter! I can't wait to read the next one :D |
| Jaypallas 2008-10-03 ch 45, | abuseCool story |
| Makurayami Ookami 2008-10-03 ch 45, | abuseWell this is going to be fun. Now how are they going to get through that? Well done. |
| EvilDime 2008-10-03 ch 45, | abuseI never quite got why Snape wanted to get the Stone, and not just prevent Quirrell from getting it. If he got it, what would he have done with it in canon? Or now? I can easily understand how even your Harry who has come to a sort of understanding with Snape will misinterpret the conversation he overheard. It's a shame he can't just go speak to Snape about it; but that would require a level of trust he won't get in many years, not after the life he's lived until now. Wonderful writing, keep it up! - Dime PS: Congrats on the Quibbler award! |