now this is cool. Are ya gonna make hilde die? awe...thats just too bad. but anyway, duo in a waiter's dress-thingy. heehee that looks funny. And heero always doing his goddamn glare thing. Where's quatre?

Hmm, you know, this story really confuses me, as I can't guess at all what were you getting at. But that's a very good thing - you keep surprising me every time I get a new theory. ^_~ Still, it's hard to say, but is Hee-chan the bad guy here? And all of the people surroundning Duo-bear seem to be much more than they let on. But I really hope Hee-chan wasn't the one who killed Hilde, Duo-bear would be devastated...
Hope you can update it soon!
Huggles

Okay the these last two chapters are really interesting way to start a story. I don't think I've read one where Hilde die. Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next installment.

Serenity

Yeah, this is off to an interesting start. I'm curious to see where it will go. So far, it's intriguing.