lolz i LOVE ur storyy! its so funny i espically like the part where Cloud calls the egg a dirty bastard

ZOMG cloud wears frilly apron!

I laughed throughout it. The imagery of Cloud in an apron taking on the eggs was just too good. Very cute!

Hahahah, this is hilarious and great!

'Tighten my frilly apron', he has a frilly apron? Must be Aerith's idea. XD

*giggles* I can imagine Cloud in a frilly apron, God that was funi lmfao good job! heh!

Is this defeat or triumph? I don't know. That's hilarious. I feel so manly! Hahahah!

Awesome xD So funny. More please! :)

ROTFL! Brilliant!
~Beeria

Ha! Cloud can't cook! This was pretty funny.

Oh my gosh, that was so funny! xD This is definitely going on my favorites, and I'm going to hyperlink it on my away message for AIM: "Cloud can't cook eggs." ^_^
I hope you write more entries for the challenge soon!

Heehee! That was so cute!! I need a househasband to make me breakfast in bed like now. ^O^ Great job, loved the humour!

OMG!! that is so friggin cute I think im going to die *faves* ;D