Ed and Hawkeye seem a bit OOC...has Ed ever called Hawkeye just that?

wow...that was unexpected. I can understand the title now

i like it

Wow, this is creepy..wouldn't their relationship be kind of paedophilic-ish? A kind of predator and victim? No offense, I generally like your writing style and I have no doubts that you are a good writer, it's just the pairing that I have a raised eyebrow (and gagging reflex) about.

Ah well, carry on and write away.

Yeah do it in a oneshot collection.

I'm not sure that I entirely get it, but I liked it anyway. n_n Best of luck with future stories. ~~enigmaSEVen