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Dontmezwitme
2009-12-06 . chapter 3
It's been a year! And we're now approaching 2010!
Update the story, oh wise College Freshman.
ToastBandits
2009-08-26 . chapter 3
Oh this is a good story. Rose should shut up though. ._. lol. XD And I saw some art for this fanfic on deviantArt. They were really good! :D And I hope you continue this! ^^
Jini
2009-08-14 . chapter 3
Hi,
This is a great story. i really like the pirate idea and having winery disguised as a boy. this fanfic is getting interesting and i would like for you to upload the next or the more chapters soon.
NightmarishlyAesthetic
2009-08-06 . chapter 3
I do hope you continue this soon :)
I love the plot! Plus, anything involving pirates has to be awesome ;)
Mistyfire's Code is Secure
2009-08-02 . chapter 3
Well, interesting. I like it. update!

~Mistyfire
crazy2696
2009-07-06 . chapter 3
I LOVE this fanfic! You've ju8st GOT to update! AS SOON AS YOU CAN!
QueenTiria
2009-06-23 . chapter 3
I really love your stories too much, which is exactly why I cannot bear to read anymore. It's way too depressing when a fic is forever unfinished.
Anyway, *cuddles your plot*

QUeenTiria ^^
reflecting
2009-05-23 . chapter 3
aahh. I knew there was only 3 chapters of this, and that it had been like a year or so since you updated...but I was so sucked in to the story and when it finally come to an end...let's just say I'm very very depressed XD it's such a great story! love it! you made Ed wonderful, from what I've read of him so far anyway! this last chapter was very exciting, held my attention through the whole thing! lovely! and Winry is great as well, I can't wait to see what'll happen! aahh! so great! -bows- please update asap! :D
karmatic.luv
2009-03-04 . chapter 3
I'm absolutley loving this so far. Pirate!Ed makes me laugh, and I love how smart both Winry is here. I hate it when people write her dumb. I even love how Rose was smart enough to play along with the 'sweetheart' lie and not go all "What are you talking about?" Can't wait to read more. Hope thus is updated soon, but if needed, take your time.
Pensulliwen
2008-11-15 . chapter 3
The only OOC thing I noticed about Ed was his fixation with the ladies, but if you cast a character as a pirate then that's pretty much a given. Great chapter, augh what a place for me to get into it! This is going to be a painful wait. But wow I thought 4 APs were bad, good luck.
Snush
2008-11-09 . chapter 3
Awesome story
Can't wait for the next chapter
This is also the first time I've read these kind of stories
Anways Update Soon :3
chibifeather
2008-09-01 . chapter 3
Wo-ow! Suspenseful! I was kind of doubtful you'd update again after I favorited it... and then promptly realized fifteen seconds later the date you had first uploaded it. I'm pleasantly surprised you did! YAY! There's not much I can say against it. To answer your question... although I know most people probably already have... I'm such an un-dedicated fan... anyways, I think you did a pretty good job with Edward's character! I mean, it was dead-on, but no one can actually portray him perfectly- psh, you should see MY horrible HORRIBLE attempts at his personality- Botched to the max! Plus since he's a pirate his personality's bound to make minor changes to go with his role.
Phew... longest review I think I have EVER left... you'd better enjoy the crap out of it!
Update sometime!
~Chib
We rock the house
2008-08-25 . chapter 3
I love it so much! You are so amazing when you wright that i felt like i was actually there! Please continue with this awesome story as soon as possible! great job and keep up the good work!
Kestrel Faeran
2008-08-25 . chapter 3
Oh no, I like it very much, and I find Edward well. I don't mind the delay, I will be as overloaded so there's no need to whine and complain. ;p

Good luck with everything then, and great story by the way! I find it very interesting. :)
Took-Baggins
2008-08-25 . chapter 3
Ed didn't strike me as being out of character or anythin. i thought you handled it pretty well.

too bad there won't be any updates for awhile, but i know where you're coming from with that AP stuff. those can be pretty tough. good luck with them!
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