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| Tearjerker22 2008-04-25 ch 1,  | abuseI nearly cried when I read this! Great job with the emotion, and I loved the humor in adding the Extendable Ear to the board. |
| Bad Mum 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseOh, this was great. I love how Ron finally got George to come out of himself and move on. The collage idea was fantastic, and the Dementors in Hawaii were hysterical! |
| Ponytail Goddess 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseLol, nice! I'm glad Ron cared enough to be brave and pull George out of his trance. |
| RemusSiriusJames 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseAwesome job. I loved the interaction with George and Ron. |
| tanpopo no hana 2007-09-06 ch 1, | abuseVery sweet! I expected it would make me sad again, but quite to the contrary it made me smile all the way through the end. I somehow wished though, that you had made Ron's decision to stay at the shop permanent (that's what JK said, right?). Don't get me wrong, it's your story, of course you don't have to follow what she imagined, but I feel bad for George for being left alone again... Anyways, I really liked your story a lot! Thanks for sharing :o) |
| fatalxbeautee 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseNUMBER 20! Sorry, just had to rejoice. I loved Fred so much, and it was such a shame that he died. Now, I'm going to feel horrible watching the movies and knowing that one of them is going to die eventually. This fic was really very good and so you had no reason to be scared. In fact, you should write more. |
| Rude and not Ginger 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abuseOh, now you've made me cry. Though I got happy again reading on, lol. Very well written! |
| silverempire 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuseI love the way you're picturing George, and the way you make him react to his loss. Ron is so Ron-like, just the way he also is in the books. It is an amazing story, you should write more. This goes definitely into my favorites. P.S. I smiled too in the end, the "Dementors: Hawaii or Bust" line is hylarious! |
| gred&forge 2007-08-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt is a wonderful story, I'm impressed. thank you. |
| petites sorcieres 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuseactually I find it funny ^-^lol ! So great ^-^ |
| Aphenphosmphobic 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. I really loved how you went into detail about everyone else's lives, especially by using photographs. |
| mackgirl 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abuseI loved it... I actually teared up a little at the beginning. I hate two things about book 7 one Fred was killed and second JKR didn't even have the decency to tell us what happened to George in the epilogue all she's done is made a small remark about it in an interview. The twins are my favorite thank you for writing this. |
| Ai Lirimaer 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. This is simply amazing! You really wrote the Ron and George well, it sounds just like the things they would say. I love the wall, and the Quibbler title- sounds just like something that J.K. herself my say! Excellent job- you're a great writer- keep up the amazing work! |
| Kin Pandun 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abusePerfect. I love the wall, and I'm glad for George. You wrote Ron really well. Thanks for writing, Kin. |
| Nanda Weasley 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseJust the kind of thing that was missing from the book! Really good!! :P |