Wow! that chapter was even better than the first one! i lurv it! POST MORE! you haven't updated in FOREVER! not cool man, not cool.

good writing! i like the way you portray characers!

Woah! I love this! Please post more!

I love all of your stories, and this seems really great!

LOVE it! I usually only ready romance one's with Bella and Edward in it but this was really good! Can't wait for the update!!

really good keep writing and please write the rest of human moment!

this is pretty intense and very sad. You must continue it and update it as soon as possible.

That was really Good!
Keep writing all of your stories!

i normally only read edward/bella stories, but this one is really good. I like the way you portrayed alice and jasper's story and how they get together...update!

this is really good it has a lot of potential and i really wanna see where its going :) update soon please

this is very very very good i liek it alot..i want u to update adn update on a human moment! Remeber edward and bella need to be vampires it just make sense...adn i lvowe this story i lvoe Alice so that is probably why!

Great story update this soon

I would love to see where this is going... A little more background would be good.

cant wait for an update but plzz update a human moment? plzz?

well writen and can't wait 4 an update!