This was so sweet. I really liked how you handled the details of Zelos and Sheena's past, it was very subtle and fit right in with the theme. I can imagine Zelos trying to comfort Sheena as a thank you for what she's done for him. Hopefully she'll be able to realize that~

Naw^_^ That was cute and funny and short!:9
"Shh,their feeding their child"XD lol. Here's a cookie!:D(hands a cookie with the word 'Mumu-sama') Make more and I'll give you a TALKING MUFFIN NAMED FARFINUGEN>_>

Ooh, loved it! It was such a fun read, and everyone felt really in character to me. Such an original idea, too! Lovely work indeed! :)

This story is so sweet! And yes, I believe an idea like this hasn't been done before. It's awesome how the scenery kind of reflected the mood of the story. And even by the end, how it ended on a lighter tone made it so much more enjoyable. Keep writing Sheelos! I'm defintely looking forward to your writing!

This is well written. I liked it right from the opening paragraph. You started off with the weather, and quickly mentioned the travellers before going back to the weather again.

I like the gradual, natural way you work in the backstory.

And I even like how Sheena encourages Zelos to think of himself as a "father" to something she's a "mother" to.

Heheh... Well, yeah... It is original, and really cute, btw.

Cute and original, I liked it =D