Love the story and characters. Please update!!

TENTEN! Ok, I really like this story. I've always been sort of curious about Yuugao ever since she appeared during the Chuunin Exams and I have to say, this story is an AMAZING background on her. And now that it has Tenten in it, it's even better. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS SOON! I'm looking forward to the next installment!

I forgot to mention a couple of things in my previous review.

I noticed these things that seemed to be inconsistent with canon:

Yuugao knows that Naruto is the Fourth's son? How?

When she recalls Iruka in the Academy, if their ages are even comparable, she fails to recall that he's the class clown, which is one of the only things we KNOW about Iruka from canon.

I love exploring the role of the kunoichi myself, so it's great to see someone else take up the mantle. I like where you've taken this story so far and how you've dealt with some of the harder issues. I'm tired of every kunoichi being portrayed as this loving, nurturing character. It gets old.

You seem to lack proofreading, though, judging by the abundance of errors in each chapter. You would benefit greatly by a beta.

When you run out of canon guidance -- which will be soon, I'm gathering -- that's when the story will be harder to write, or at least that's how it would be for me. I look forward to seeing which direction you take it in.

i really like this fic. i really do. it's one of those fics i'll read again and again.
kenni

aw tenten and neji scene! That's so cute!!
This story is really good...update soon! ^^

OMG
Did Kakashi leave ANBU because he is in love with Yuugao and didn't want to be on a team with her and Hayate?

I hope you add to this story. It's really good. I'm guessing that Hayate will be dead really soon. Plus, it would be really neat to read about the Sound invasion from an ANBU pov.

I love Iruka... but why did he show up with Kakashi and Hayate?

Thank you for writing an ANBU/Yuugao fic. They are rare and this one is really good.

*has to snicker lightly at the last line's reference to the chapter title*
A nice, momentarily light hearted chapter. Definitely had fun reading it.

Great writing. It's sad to think that Hayate will die soon enough... I adore your Hayate/Yuugao. and I absolutely adored Tenten and Neji. hope we'll see more of them.

So cute! When reading about Yuugao earlier, she seemed like a mix of Neji's stoicism with all the bits of Tenten you showcased in this chapter. Lovely! Good luck with whatever reality throws your way, but I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter . . .

GREAT! it's good to see a story about a secundary character, and not centred in Naruto or the others, this one's great, please Update!

You are the most amazing of a fic I've read right off the bat! You definitely need to write more of this story...I'm dying and its only been a few hours! I need more.!

It's actually very nice to read a Naruto fic that doesn't center around either Sasuke or Naruto