 alirodina 2009-05-26 . chapter 1Indeed. You tell him, Tonks! :] |
 metawolfagus 2007-08-31 . chapter 1i love that he has to ask her so many times... its so infuriatingly remus-ish... she tells him over and over, yes yes, i want you, regardless of the F.L.P. and he's still so bloody noble and terrified.
great fic.
i like tonks's ending line as well. |
 Rachel 2007-08-30 . chapter 1 Sweet, and intense. I'm impressed, as usual. And it felt completely right that Dora would define the nature of fire/love by its beauty (light) and goodness (warmth), pushing Remus to see beyond its destructive potential (with my burned hand). His second, impassioned question - "Are you *sure?*" - was very moving. Thanks for another lovely story. |
 animagus pawz 2007-08-22 . chapter 1Remus and Tonks are so cute together! You did a good job writing this story. Keep writing!
-pawz |
 beckybeckybecky 2007-08-21 . chapter 1Aww! This is really good. Just one thing though: Here in England, we don't say broiled. We say grilled. Just thought you might like to know that as HP is set in England etcetera, etcetera. Lol. XD xx :) |
 Memories Left Abandoned 2007-08-21 . chapter 1Yay! Very cute. |
 Mistress of Darkness 2007-08-21 . chapter 1Wow... this was oddly gripping... An excellent job, by the way. I loved how you portrayed them. Kudos to you for a job well done! |