Wow, I'm speechless! This is brilliant!
So beautifully written with such a great choice of words!
It even rhymes! It really is a very nice poem or ode, with a sad touch. But how couldn't it have a sad touch, seeing as it is Severus Snape's life you wrote about!
Well, you captured his feelings and turning points in his life very well!
Keep up the good work!

Greetings

Very well done! You've managed to capture some of his spirit in this peace and I especially like the sixth and seventh stanzas.

that was beautiful! thats all i can translate into words!

Wonderful, truly wonderful. I love it.