 marjorienescio 2009-10-25 . chapter 2I´m sorry she forgot her book. She had made such a grand exit. Lovely story.
PS there are some lips that should be hips ;) |
 NYlovergirl 2008-10-12 . chapter 2Not kill you... well maybe
i love it, as always! |
 green dame 2008-03-23 . chapter 2oh! I've waited for so long that he would kiss her in that absolutely marvelous fic! what have you done? I'm kidding of course! I love the story very-very much! It makes me feel so... comfortable |
 Mishka 2007-09-08 . chapter 2 Oh well, Janet, another lovely one! I have given a review for this story, but that was in the forum - and that was another thing.. :D SO, now, I want to praise you again for another wonderful story! Boy, do I love fluff! I love the interplay between them - so cute and oh, i love the flirting that's going on! :) I wonder what happened next when you the door fell shut behind her when she came back to the kitchen... Hmm, I really wonder... Haha! Congratulations for this new-born babe, luv! See you in the forum!
Smiles,
Mishka |
 Monker 2007-08-29 . chapter 2This story was so cute! I think that you got Joseph's and Clarisse's behaviours down to the T! I simply LOVED the man vs. woman dating dynamics. It was absalutly hilarious. Although I disagree with Clarisse...I still call it "courting". And, although I would be terribly embarrassed if I were in her shoes, I couldn't help but laugh out loud when Joseph read a little from Clarisse's book. That was great. And the bee sting was pretty funny, but I feel bad for that poor girl. I think you could easilly take this further on and write a sequil...but it stands fine on it's own. I think I would like to know what happened...but at the same time, I don't think any of us have any doubts about what WOULD happen...so it's not like you have to put our minds to rest by telling us what happened after she went in.
All in all...I loved this story. And you can now find it among my favorites, to be sure.
Well done!
Monker |
 Zsulie 2007-08-25 . chapter 2Hey this is not fair! Ending a story like this...This is not fair! But I loved it! Don't you want to write this next scene? Please
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Sue |
 Della Street-Mason 2007-08-23 . chapter 2LOL! Well, not kill you Janet Dear.. just hunt you down with pen and paper so you can finish it properly!! Nah..Just kidding!
I just loved this story ever so much!! As much as I'm loving the other! Well Done Sweets! |
 KathleenK 2007-08-22 . chapter 2Well, if you are in hiding somewhere, I hope you brought a pen and paper with you and are occupying your time by writing. You're very talented.
This was just a wonderful story.
K |
 Captain Weirdo 2007-08-22 . chapter 2That was just...delicious! |
 aserene 2007-08-22 . chapter 2Well maybe not kill you...just hurt. That was wonderful! A lovely distraction for waiting! |
 michelle 2007-08-21 . chapter 1 this has to be one of the best stories out there - please finish asap. |
 Captain Weirdo 2007-08-21 . chapter 1How fun! I can't wait for more. |
 JulieFan4Eva 2007-08-21 . chapter 1I Love it, it is Cute!
I Can't Wait To read what
they'll confess next. |
 KathleenK 2007-08-21 . chapter 1What a suprise!
I see you write the sweet stuff just as deftly as you write the anguish.
I thought this was going to be a one chapter story, but as impatiently as I'm waiting for an update on Worlds Apart, I'm intrigued by this one too.
Good luck keeping both stories going!
K |