Wow. That's... quite something.

I really like how you've used your language here, to show the difference between Axel and Saïx's speaking and thinking styles.

I do hope you carry on this story - but it looks like you won't because your last update was in 2007. That's a bit sad, but understandable if you have other things you want to be working on. I'll add it on alert, just in case :)

Ciau!

~Seka~

i like the story ^^ i hope you can continue

What a fascinating start! I like the way you write and I think I am not the only one who is anxious about how this will go on - so PLEASEE UPDATE. it´s really sad you take so long :(

why are u taking so long to update?

This is seeming to be pretty good. The vocabulary used is incredible. I will continue to read on your next update. :)

I love it so far and I can't wait to see what will happen,so please update soon!

I really enjoyed this story and am Hopeing to see more the story line is really great, for your first lemon, if thats what you said, it's good!

Oohoohoo! Continue please!

OMFG! You need to wright more! Please!

O! Do I see angst and lovely Axel, saix angst ahead?

So where are the other chapters? :3

Ok, I'll say this once: UPDATE ALREADY!

O.O . . . . . . YOU. . . . . . .SOON!

this is a fantastic start to what i suspect will be an even more fantastic story! i might just cry . . . .i feel like beating roxas over the head with that freakin' weapon of his for even considering leaving axel behind, much less acctually DOING it.

omfg! more! i want more! i absolutely lurve saix and axel...and i lurve saix's sadisticness...keep writing please!