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ferryboat George 11/9/11 . chapter 1
I prefer seeing my happy endings, but it was interesting
sheppardlover928 10/13/11 . chapter 1
Another excellent story! Your stories are always unique in some way! This one was haunting, sad, hopeful...John spilled his emotions onto those tapes, like I imagine, he really didnt think anyone but his captors would hear...I cried tears along with Elizabeth at his abuse...The ending left me wondering-kind of like it "up in the air" as to what happens-but kind of feel cheated of your version of the ending at the same time...Wonder why John didnt make it home right away, why has a week passed? Where is he? Obviously he made it to the jumper and away-but he was obviously hurt badly-Is he unable to fly home? Did he die? Ok-I will go with my happy ending version where John had to land somewhere remote, so he could get well and throw his captors off his trail...he figures a week to recuperate should be enough and you ended the story just short of the "Unscheduled Activation...Colonel Sheppard's IDC"!
hajimebassaidai 5/26/10 . chapter 1
A great device, not naming anyone at the start and of course the reader knows none of the messages were ever sent.

The gradual realisations throughout the recordings are nicely scattered with direct messages to the others and half a conversation as he knows their responses so well.

Great story!
Potterworm 8/24/09 . chapter 1
Really unique, good story.
gem1n1 8/10/09 . chapter 1
Loved

I really enjoyed how you didnt give it a full ending

The messages were great
Whirlwind421 6/17/09 . chapter 1
*sniff* You made me cry! Not fair! Awesome story!
Miss Becky 1/8/09 . chapter 1
So I'm starting on my quest to read all your fic. I have no idea how long this will take, but I'm quite anticipating lots of fun. :-)

I love this story! I had forgotten about that XF story...wow.

And as for who's tougher...no contest! Shep would wipe the floor with Mulder. :-)

I like the ending, bleak as it is. There's still hope, so not all is lost. And it's nice to be able to imagine our own happy ending, however it comes about.
Ms. Pagliacci 6/23/08 . chapter 1
I know it's been a little while since you wrote this; but I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed it!
StarKitty 10/15/07 . chapter 1
Great story! There's only one problem with it-it needs a sequal that hasn't been written. I hope you'll write one.
Stargate Groupie 9/7/07 . chapter 1
This story was awesome! Very powerful writing, John's pain really came through. I hope you write a sequel. Great job!
Yllek 9/1/07 . chapter 1
Oh Nice story! And I'm going with a happy ending here. If he made it that far, he'll make it all the way back. ("Echt" is also the Dutch word for "real" - funny uh)
PrincessPatrice 8/29/07 . chapter 1
Good story but i would have liked for Shep to get back so we could all share in the whump recovery stage - Sequal to it might be nice!
Anjirika 8/26/07 . chapter 1
Oh- so sad. Hope you do an epilogue or something cause I want to know if John gets back safe and sound... good story though.
Little Miss Sci-Fi 8/22/07 . chapter 1
WHAT HAPPENED! Where's John? is he alive? where is he!
Jackrocks 8/21/07 . chapter 1
AWESOME! I really have never read a fic like this. The imagines John's gave me, through his messages, were so vivid I could almost feel his pain.

Fantastic Shep-Whump and so well written. I LOVED it.
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