More kid fics, tsk tsk.

augh! NO! you cant let goku die when jita loves him! bring him back!

hi! good fic write more!

YOU PEOPLE MAKE ME SICK GETING A COUPLE TOGETHER AND THEN MAKING ONE OF THEM DIE ITS DISGUSTING!

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AW NO! Goku died again! *cries* AW MAN! I managed to keep from crying in the last fic Goku died in, but now I can't help it! *whimpers* Poor, poor Goku! Very well written fic though.

*winks and flashes V-sign* Not bad for a first-timer. *grins cheekily* It gets better with practice, therefore I think you should write another one. Or better yet, write a Truten fic! j/k Seriously, this was a cute fic, kinda sad but hey, that's okay. Ignore those idiots who flame your work - their words are worthless - too bad they haven't figured that out yet huh? *hands over a membershi card* Welcome to the Authors-Flamed-By-Bakayarou's-Club. Where flames are enjoyed by all 'cause they're great for making s'mores!

Bring Goku back wtih the Dragon Balls or have Vegeta follow him. Those two are just too perfect for one another.

it was sad but "it destiny?" was sadder.keep it up though

Awwwww... thats sooo kawaii! V. sweet, and indeed v. tragic. Excellent for your first yaoi!

*sniffles* WAAAAAAAA! *sobs into Heero's tank top* *wails* *blows nose into his tank top* (Heero: *disgusted face*) WAAAAA! That was sad! *wails, pouts* *continues to blow nose on his tank top* (Heero: *gets annoyed*) *sniffles* It was good...but SAD! *wails some more* This continues for several more hours until... *Heero is covered in snot and goes back into his Bisho-ball* *blinks* *shrugs* Oh, well. *gets Sano-chan-my lil' section's mascot!-* WAAAAA! *blows nose on his 'BAD' t-shirt* (Sano: *sighs* Not this again...)

It's a big suck, I can tell. That was my opinion, and if you don't like it kiya you can yourself up with it. (it seem to me that's how you like it, don't you?)

*box of Kleenex*Why*starts to cry

My God! Do you guys have to be so harsh to the author? Its' his/her story and if you didn't like it why bother to read it in the first place. A warning was placed at the summary you know. It really irritates me that people just write the most thoughtless comments as reviews. Sheesssshhh! Anyways..for your first yaoi fic, it was okay..but you should take some time to spell check your work. Do not let people discourage you however with their worthless comments. Keep on writing what your heart tells you to. Ja ne!

This story was not in character at all. To be honest, it was completely STUPID. This is just an insult to the characters, especially Vegeta. he's more dignified than that. But let me just say your story good point, at least you didnt get graphic.