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| Foi 2007-08-24 ch 1,  | abuseThat was amazing! Im awe struck, you have to write more fan fics like this. |
| Beeria 2007-08-23 ch 1, | abuseI liked this one. Angsty but really well done. ~Beeria |
| ChildlikeEmpress 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abusewow that was intense...but I am confused. (I've never played the game) v_v so in it did Cloud attack Aeris like that?? I'm assuming it happened. Anyways it was a very good fic, well written as are all your works. (: |
| icor 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseI like this - really like this - perhaps moreso than anything you've done before with the pairing. Then again I may be bias, because I do love brutality in my Cloud/Aerith fics, and you did choose to write about a scene I've alwayed wanted to see explored, and always meant to myself. I particularly like the way your Cloud is outside of himself but completely aware of what he's doing, almost as if he's watching what's happening in the same way the reader is. This is Cloud at his breaking point (and therefore, best), still sane enough to realise that even if he's the one doing the beating, she's the one who turn out okay inside; wonderful. "But he doesn't want her to go, not to danger or to safety. " Well that's just Cloud's feeling summed up, isn't it? :) The last line is just sweet, which makes this all the more horrible - and I mean that in the best of ways. |