This was totally beautiful and amazing! And everyone was really quite in character. Well-done!

He's an ice cube after all so of course it's hard to crack the bastard.But you did well, you did a GREAT job at having their personalities in tack by the way.^^

Some just put an OOC Tsukimori or Kaho-chan without a care and then poof!That's it.

Thank you for sharing such a great fic.It's really good...and pretty awesome by the way.Kono fanfic wa daisuki da!Honto da.^^

Very well done! Once more I can tell that I truly enjoyed a story to the very end. Not only that you managed to create the same intense atmosphere as Kure-san does it with her Manga, you intensified it even more. Straightforward to the point, very sensible towards those little details in Len's and Kahoko's personalities being so typical them as well as their strong yet hidden longings, and of course an impressive ability to virtuously dance with words and meanings - that's what makes this story a piece of art.

Thank you for this fantastic fanfiction.

its really very sweet. thanks.

God, but this is really beautiful! I loved it to the core! More!

Lovely oneshot. =)

This has been very emotional for me to read. It's wonderful.

Your simple style of writing is certainly unique and the story flowed perfectly. To be honest, I loved it. Keep up the good work !

cool! love the concept.

You don't have to worry about any of them being out of character. I thought it was wonderful. It's a bit hard to think of them when they're adults, since the manga doesn't really go that far, but I think you did a wonderful job. ^_^

Very unique, quite wonderful.

I'm sure I won't be able to say anything new that you haven't heard before, but I just have to let you know how I enjoyed this, very much. It just pulled me into it, the flowing narrative, the characters - it's beautiful. Thank you!

THIS IS PURE LOVE, AND YOU ARE AMAZING.

Sigh. Just *sigh. Tsukimori was in character, and if I didn't love T/K so much I would have reached inside the computer screen to claim him for myself. Len + Possibly insane author = BEAUTIFUL VIRTUAL BABIES.

I'm sugh a fan!girl sometimes. B)

Anyway. Love the angst, my life is now complete with this.

why so worried?you kept len on character (in my opinion anyway),as well as tsuichura and hino (yunoki is, well, yunoki), so dont worry much. lolz. i liked everything about your story. ^^

...OMG its so kawaii