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raspberryred 8/7/11 . chapter 1
Loved it! Sounds kinda close to the one I was asking for, but I know you have more fics in you! Good job! Love me a spanked Reid!
Shayla17 4/28/11 . chapter 1
Alright, so I thought that i'd start with your first CM story, because I've read them all and I reaaaalllyyy enjoyed them... a lot. Idk, I just really wanted to review! I felt it was only fair since I reread these stories a lot and... ok. Gonna stop rambling and review.

I love the ep you based this story off. Reid is one of my favorite characters because of his depth and fragility. I've always thought Reid was the one who needs the most guidance and reassurance, and you pretty much captured that in this story. I love how fatherly Gideon is with Reid, how willing he is to step up and give him what he needs... (I'll always love Gideon more than Rossi... just sayin). As usual, the emotion in your writing and the way capture the characters is spot on... great job! Thanks for writing :D
Buffyxenaman 3/29/11 . chapter 1
very goos job
Indigo1100 8/5/10 . chapter 1
Nice story! I think the changes you mentioned worked just fine, and I like how here even this is a 'team' effort, with Morgan reporting a problem, Hotch generalizing it, and then Gideon actually going to deal with it. And I like how it ends on a 'we'll work through this and it'll work out' note.
wandamarie 5/17/10 . chapter 1
wow you do not make you boss mad do you thanks keep up the good writing thanks
literarylesbian37 3/19/10 . chapter 1
Emily Prentiss and Jennifer Jeurau. Could be spelled wrong, though.
Sue1313 5/15/08 . chapter 1
This one was also so good, I have enjoyed all of your Criminal Minds stories. They have just been wonderful and have made my day. I hope you will continue to write more stories. Thanks for bringing so much enjoyment to so many readers.
seaoftrouble 3/21/08 . chapter 1
Aw, poor Reid! The episode where he gets kidnapped is so heartbreaking. I just watched "Jones" and I thought the conversation between Gideon and Reid in the club needed something more, and this story did just that. Thanks for writing this!
101spacemonkey 9/18/07 . chapter 1
its a good story, though im not sure if the ending is realistic, it is however quite funny! in a disturbing way, its like the extremes of the characters, with Gideon taking the whole Reid is my son a bit too far, i don't approve of spanking in real life but i think it did ass something here. however, i don't think Reid would have reacted like that, i think he would have drawn into himself a bit more, but for comedy purposes it worked, nice warning at the beginning its nice to see that on a fanfic, some fanfics don't really warn you, not that i mind, i think im now immune to most things by now, too much fanfic will prevent anyone from being shocked by anything!
Mes 8/26/07 . chapter 1
Really enjoyed this story, I've been wanting to read a Reid & Gideon father/son type thing for a while and couldn't find many around.

The discipline was handled really well and was probably just the kind of firm caring that Reid needed to set him on track again.

Hope to see more of your fics in the future, in fandoms I know, cos this was a really enjoyable story.
tearbos 8/23/07 . chapter 1
I didn't know what to expect from this story, but I liked it. It was kind of sad, kind of sweet.
notamember 8/23/07 . chapter 1
Supergirl,

I can well imagine that the trauma of being kidnapped would have a lasting impact! Poor Spencer! Fortunately, he has people around him who understand that and care enough about him to step in and help him cope with the post-traumatic-stress from his ordeal. While he may not have much liked being spanked, at least he knows without a doubt he isn't going to have to deal with all this alone.

Great story hon,

Tracyboo
rae1070 8/22/07 . chapter 1
Thanks for doing a Criminal Minds fic! In my book Gideon is the perfect disciplinarian, kind and full of authority! I hope you continue this.

Rae
LoraLee2 8/21/07 . chapter 1
Good story, here's a little friendly constructive criticism, your story is good, but there are a lot of canon mistakes, for instance Prentiss called Reid not Morgan, there's also several spelling errors. I suggest either finding a beta who's knowledgable in the fanon, or doing some research - there's a girl who types up transcripts of all the episodes, this is her site:

It's free and you can review an ep before you write about it.

Also, when you're writing in a fanon, you generally don't have to introduce your characters, your audience already knows them or they wouldn't bother reading about them.
PoeticallyIncorrect1 8/21/07 . chapter 1
There is spanking that can lead to directions I'd rather not go into detail. And there is spanking as a simple punishment such a parent disciplining a child. And that's how I read it. Reid was acting like a child and probably needed some sense knocked into him. Not too bad a story all in all.

JJ is Jennifer Jeaurau (not sure of spelling) and Prentis' first name is Emily just for your future reference.
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