...Wow. That was slightly depressing, you captured it wonderfully. Luckily in the series we have Azula constantly trying to kill him XD

Makes this more interesting. Great job ^^

This was amazingly beautiful! I can't even begin to express it's wonderfulness!

Wow - at first glance your story seems very simple, but, looking closer, it's filled with restless apprehension and any hope the group may have once had, seems to have turnt into realisation that they may never find help at all...

Interesting and kind of sad.

I like it! I like the very pure and simple writing that makes the story interesting without making it over the top. You can actually see the characters doing this. Very nice!