 yuphemia 2008-07-12 . chapter 1great! >.< so cute! |
 Twilight Archangel 2008-06-18 . chapter 1Cool! Haha |
 drakie cakie 2008-03-03 . chapter 1Hehe, I liked the beginning about the carousel. I'm always wanting to go on it at the mall and the zoo. Luckily, my friends are cool about it.
The only things that bothered me were the few misspelled words and the random author's note. Spellcheckers are really easy to download free [Google toolbar. I LOVE Google toolbar] or just have a peer-edit to make sure you catch them all! Think I'm gonna go check out your other stories. |
 Princess-Anime 2007-11-12 . chapter 1hahahahahahhahahaha.. I totally loved that one.. totally cute.. way to go...pla come up wit a new story |
 StealerOfDreams 2007-10-01 . chapter 1Ahh, I laughed out loud at that ending. Nice, nice. Thanks for sharing! |
 daizy's insanity 2007-09-16 . chapter 1 I loved it... The last line is great, and Taichi being not so subtle. ;D |
 me 2007-09-11 . chapter 1 soo sweet!!^^! |
 Badger-Chan 2007-08-29 . chapter 1brilliant, comical and light a great mix. more please lol! |
 KoumiLoccness 2007-08-25 . chapter 1Coo mon lol Peace then... |
 reese 2007-08-22 . chapter 1 lol, i love the yamachi taito part. hilarious. |