Interesting, You wrote Yamato pretty well, and it flowed quite peacefully. I like how you played off of the name combinations. Good job.

great! . so cute!

Cool! Haha

Hehe, I liked the beginning about the carousel. I'm always wanting to go on it at the mall and the zoo. Luckily, my friends are cool about it.

The only things that bothered me were the few misspelled words and the random author's note. Spellcheckers are really easy to download free [Google toolbar. I LOVE Google toolbar] or just have a peer-edit to make sure you catch them all! Think I'm gonna go check out your other stories.

hahahahahahhahahaha.. I totally loved that one.. totally cute.. way to go...pla come up wit a new story

Ahh, I laughed out loud at that ending. Nice, nice. Thanks for sharing!

I loved it... The last line is great, and Taichi being not so subtle. ;D

soo sweet!

brilliant, comical and light a great mix. more please lol!

Coo mon lol Peace then...

lol, i love the yamachi taito part. hilarious.