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yuphemia
2008-07-12
ch 1,
abusegreat! >.< so cute!
Twilight Archangel
2008-06-18
ch 1,
abuseCool! Haha
Prettypinkdepression
2008-03-03
ch 1,
abuseHehe, I liked the beginning about the carousel. I'm always wanting to go on it at the mall and the zoo. Luckily, my friends are cool about it.

The only things that bothered me were the few misspelled words and the random author's note. Spellcheckers are really easy to download free [Google toolbar. I LOVE Google toolbar] or just have a peer-edit to make sure you catch them all! Think I'm gonna go check out your other stories.
Princess-Anime
2007-11-12
ch 1,
abusehahahahahahhahahaha.. I totally loved that one.. totally cute.. way to go...pla come up wit a new story
StealerOfDreams
2007-10-01
ch 1,
abuseAhh, I laughed out loud at that ending. Nice, nice. Thanks for sharing!
daizy's insanity
2007-09-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseI loved it... The last line is great, and Taichi being not so subtle. ;D
me
2007-09-11
ch 1, anon.
abusesoo sweet!!^^!
Badger-Chan
2007-08-29
ch 1,
abusebrilliant, comical and light a great mix. more please lol!
KoumiLoccness
2007-08-25
ch 1,
abuseCoo mon lol Peace then...
reese
2007-08-22
ch 1, anon.
abuselol, i love the yamachi taito part. hilarious.
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