I loved that scene of the comic too (he he =P), and I really like the way you wrote it. I hadn't realized there were any Inverloch fanfics in , and I wasn't really expecting any of them to be very good, but I can see that I was wrong. I think yours is lovely =) To favs!

ah. Wonderful job; it transcribed my feelings perfectly. Excellent :)

so entertaining that wen it ended i was mad cuz i loved it

Oh jimminy that was so good. It brought tears to my eyes...that or I'm just sleepy... It's so sweet I love it! ^-^

Liked it a lot! Love Varden and Lei'ella together!

This was very good reading and fits very accurately into the storyline.