Beautifully written, and in the general style of the narration/writer from the film. I like how you gave a good backstory to her seemingly random habit of killing off everyone.

WOW! You are an AMAZING writer! You should try to publish something! (other than fanfics, of course;])

Gods all be damned, you cursed woman! You've made it immensely frustrating for me to track you down. I had to go through an abundance of mediocre writers before I stumbled upon you quite abruptly. You just HAD to go and change your name there. What was wrong with Contrarian? I liked Contrarian. I have nothing against Kaybur, but Contrarian is infinitely more interesting -unless, of course, you've got some manner of anecdote behind it-. I decided, one day, that on a whim I would go back and revisit some old haunts. I load up the search screen, type in the letters and I get nothing! And why have you taken down several -or at least one- of your fics? They were good, I enjoyed them. What went wrong?! But I digress -you've surely had enough of my ranting by now-.

This was insightful. An intriguing addition to an already thought-provoking film. Keep on updating.

I really liked this. You got some beautiful parts in here, and you wrote something different from the other stuff.