it was so sweet and sad...

I loved it...

heya! ^_^ I personally think this one best suits the theme 'love lost' probably just because i like the van/hitomi pairing. ^^; not a very good reason is it? ^^; but i also think it's really lovely and you have a real knack for writing! ::huggles::

o.o What's gonna happen? Will the 2 meet again?

Please continue this soon!!! KAWAII!!!

oooohhh!i luv it!

oooooooo do they get back together!!!?!?!?!?!? write more please i love this it's wonderful!!Van and Hitomi Forever!!!

WOW! I love this fanfic! Its so cute. Can't wait until the next Chapter. Please make the next chapters ASAP cause i'm dying to know what happens next. PLZ PLZ PLZ!!! don't leave me hanging!

Cool, nice one! better submit ur second chap! I'm waiting ^-^

KEEP WRITING IT PLEEZ!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT SO MCUH!!!!!!!!!!! KAWAII KAWAII KAWAII KAWAII KAWAII KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hurry the f*** up the rest of the story.

omg I loved it!!!! Its so sad!!! Write more!!!

hey, i really liked it! hurry and finish the next chapter. plz email me when u do. thnx