Ooh, I really enjoyed the emotion behind that. Great work!

-A

D'aw! They sound like such a happy couple, Aang's a lucky guy. I loved how it was just them in this oneshot and how they were so free and open with eachother. I also

Aw! This was really cute!

Excellently written.
So full of passion.

I think I need some ice-water after reading this j/k.

The Fire Lord STILL wonders how you're able to write like this!  You know, with the abundance of talent and all.  =)

So, yeah.  This story.  If I can put it into words...

Even in marriage, Katara remains a tease.  It's in her nature -- she's passionate, if not the tiniest bit naughty.  What a blast to read!

And Aang, the ever-innocent one.  He knew what he wanted to do; he wanted to touch her as she danced for him.  But he was uncertain... childlike, almost, in that there was always hesitation.  Shyness!  A married adult, and he still blushes at the sight of his wife.  Too cute, and EXACTLY how I would picture him later in life!

And the end, with him wanting to be called "Dear".  That's... really adorable, okay?

Remember: it was steamy and full of passion without being raunchy.  THAT takes some serious skill!

I can only attribute it to TALENT.  No other force could bring such a beautiful work of art to life!

Beautiful. Your stories flow really well and nicely. And I see what you mean when you say any innocence of that ship left you! lol. And yeah, S3 Katara does spark that kind of idea in your head... (I wouldn't mind seeing that canonized either) *guilty smirk*

BWAHAHAHAHAHA! IT WAS KEWL/ROMANTIC/FANTASTICAL/yeah... you get the point, I loved it!

Haha, nice that was really something. ;) Good I wouldn't mind seeing Katara perform that dance lol. I wasn't suer of the timeframe you set this in at first and I was like when the hell did Katara turn so bleh. Anyway nice lil oneshot ;) Keep em coming.