 TamariChan 12/20/11 . chapter 10Love it, love it, love all the drabbles. If you wanted, I think the two related ones (with Kel/Lerant in the stables) would make a great fic on its own. You could pull it out of this and make it a 3 or 4 shot. Anyway, I love your writing, and your characterization of Lerant, who is amazing. |
 I. V. Green 5/19/09 . chapter 4Aw! So true, so true, they are meant to be...*gazes dreamily off into the distance* |
 I. V. Green 5/19/09 . chapter 1KelLerant is the best ever! |
 Heather the Writer 12/16/08 . chapter 10heehehee.
I was reading through your stories again. And I felt compelled to leave a review to tell you how much I love your fics. Your sense of humour is dead on.
“Oh, this? I wondered if anyone would notice!” Dom and Lerant shared a look. “It’s exercise gear made from an entirely new fabric, developed by mages. I call it a leotard, from the old Thak. Look, it’s very stretchy,” he plucked a handful of material and pulled it a foot away from his chest, “so allowing for comfort and freedom of movement.” He turned round and touched his toes. “See?” He asked from between his legs.
...*collapses into giggles* |
 LunaSphere 12/1/08 . chapter 10this was utter, hilarious crack. |
 LunaSphere 12/1/08 . chapter 9HAHA |
 LunaSphere 12/1/08 . chapter 8Oh, I do hope you continue with this particular take on Kel/Lerant. |
 LunaSphere 12/1/08 . chapter 7I hadn't read your note at the top of this chapter until I read the drabble and I spent some time trying to work out how the chronology of this fit with the earlier kissing drabble! |
 LunaSphere 12/1/08 . chapter 6I like how you took the coin cliche and made it meaningful. This idea was just awesome: "what he realised as he knelt before King Jonathon, was that maybe the coin had been flipped over." |
 LunaSphere 12/1/08 . chapter 5hilarious and sweet at once-enjoyed. |
 LunaSphere 12/1/08 . chapter 4Aw, this was so *cute*! |
 LunaSphere 12/1/08 . chapter 3You're really making me like Lerant-he was such a throw-away character in the books, I never really gave him much thought! |
 LunaSphere 12/1/08 . chapter 2This was a really well sketched out encounter. This line was just downright creepy in a delightful way: "He wasn't quite sure what he saw behind her eyes, but her knew nothing like that lived in his skull. " |
 LunaSphere 12/1/08 . chapter 1that last line was wonderful. |
 Tortall101 9/3/08 . chapter 10That's a hilarious vision - poor Numair :D |