A great story. Very funny.

That was entertaining. I especially liked Jack's reactions at the end.

Ahaha! He slapped him!

oh, you must continue. or write something else with will/jack. this was great. :)

I liked that, indeed I did.

HeHe. Luffles to Jackie!! Great story! And a review from me, yay for you!! You get an eggy review, no that that will seem like much to you. Soery, I'm just ober happy, now. =3 HeHeHee!!

- Eggy

XD How wonderful!

*giggles madly* oh you silly, silly boys when will you ever learn. Awesome job :)

Your ability to steal into the skin of your characters is one I envy and admire.

well I'll be damned, you did write a pirates fanfic! XD and I didn't see anything extraordinarily out of character, I thought it was a fun story! ah, Will, thats what you get. poor fella.

This was definitely a nice break from your normal work, and very enjoyable. Really, in PotC you can't get much better than a drunk Will and more-than-questionably-drunk Jack, haha.

I found two possible grammatical errors (and don't hate me for this; you said to point them out!): in the eighteenth paragraph, second sentence, it says, "The crew stepped over and around him over him..." (I have a feeling the "over him" was just repeated on accident); also in the twenty-fourth paragraph, second sentence, it seems like you're missing a "to" between "decided" and "let."

That's all. Keep posting more fanfics! You're one of the most talented writers on this site. I want to see more!

WTH!!?!! was this about?

XD This makes me lol and super happy. I love the ending especially and the interaction between Jack and Will.

Bwahahahaha!