Reviews for Thief of Dreams

Reviews For: Thief of Dreams

timme 2008-04-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseoh, you must continue. or write something else with will/jack. this was great. :)
Jellyjade Bean 2007-11-03 ch 1,	abuseI liked that, indeed I did.
Eggman Oyu Castle 2007-10-24 ch 1,	abuseHeHe. Luffles to Jackie!! Great story! And a review from me, yay for you!! You get an eggy review, no that that will seem like much to you. Soery, I'm just ober happy, now. =3 HeHeHee!! - Eggy
Generally Maz 2007-10-05 ch 1,	abuseXD How wonderful!
feste3 2007-08-23 ch 1,	abusegiggles madly oh you silly, silly boys when will you ever learn. Awesome job :)
Riana1 2007-08-22 ch 1,	abuseYour ability to steal into the skin of your characters is one I envy and admire.
Ninja Shen 2007-08-22 ch 1,	abusewell I'll be damned, you did write a pirates fanfic! XD and I didn't see anything extraordinarily out of character, I thought it was a fun story! ah, Will, thats what you get. poor fella.
Hypocritical Mindset 2007-08-22 ch 1,	abuseThis was definitely a nice break from your normal work, and very enjoyable. Really, in PotC you can't get much better than a drunk Will and more-than-questionably-drunk Jack, haha. I found two possible grammatical errors (and don't hate me for this; you said to point them out!): in the eighteenth paragraph, second sentence, it says, "The crew stepped over and around him over him..." (I have a feeling the "over him" was just repeated on accident); also in the twenty-fourth paragraph, second sentence, it seems like you're missing a "to" between "decided" and "let." That's all. Keep posting more fanfics! You're one of the most talented writers on this site. I want to see more!
amaurea3000 2007-08-21 ch 1,	abuseWTH!!?!! was this about?
Kioa 2007-08-21 ch 1,	abuseXD This makes me lol and super happy. I love the ending especially and the interaction between Jack and Will.
OutInTheStorm 2007-08-21 ch 1,	abuseBwahahahaha!

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