Dammit, why did you stop writing! You need to keep going! I'm /dying/ to know more! What happens next!

Interesting, this is more focused on what the person is thinking.

I like writing that way too.

It's a rather long-winded way to write, but if the person has the time to read through it then the story is actually very interesting.

Very deep. I like that this reinforces the backstory of the game while adding more depth and understanding to it. I also like that you deconstructed the archetype of Saix being a wild animal. You seem to have an excellent understanding of Kingdom Hearts and must be a huge fan to have written this so accurately and plausibly.

I think this is mislabeled as mature since there's no sex, profanity, drug references, nudity, or anything else like that in here.

This story is amazing! I can't wait to see what Saix discovers!

NICE! XD Can't wait for MORE!

Lerato... PLEASE UPDATE! SAIX NEEDS XEMMY! X3

Well, if there WERE more xemsai, i'd play it more often, THAT's for sure! Gah, Saix, my favorite Angst-puppy.

huzzah and onward, please! write more!

Hm. This story looks interesting! I'm looking forward to seeing what Saix discovers. Plus, you don't see as much of this pairing anymore! Good stuff so far! Your friend did a wonderful job translating: As you did writing this! Update soon! :3

Oh Lerato, I didn't realize you posted it here too! I just had to read it again, it's such an interesting read. And I'm really curious of how the plot stretches out. Update soon!

Nice job on your first english fic!

Though this is translated, the content is simply amazing. Your friend did very well. I'm sure you are a magnificent writer even though you say you are not good at english. I'm captured already.

Please, do update soon.