Your writing abilities are superb, and the plot is highly original, though I think you've hit a few snags. But then again I'm properly just beeing picky.

I see you've left out the whole bhaalspawn plotline, which is kinda dishearthning to a diehard bg fan, but then again its a small thing.

Your use of were-wolfes and how their superior to "everything" (note the "" seeing as you did impress upon the might of a dragon and to a lesser decree Irenicus)

Gets kinda old...one little spell and the werewolf is incapitated or unable to move and its strength and speed isn't going to do a damn thing.

(It might just be me, but I felt like I was reading one of those godawful "fan fiction" that NEEDS to impress upon how divine and unbelivable powerful vampires/werewolfes are...to sum it up fanboy or some such.)

Magic in your story is toned down alot in favour of more mondane things, there were a lot of times in your story I wanted to gnarst my teeth at their inability to use magic. Even though it was at their disposal and it would actually make sense to use, they did it the "hard" way which doesn't really make sense in how you portrayed the char.s

There were a few other things but I'll leave them alone.

Author,

I enjoy your stories and for one not indoctrined into most of these storylines. The plot is not as obvious as Zaknafien appears to believe. Good work and keep the stories coming, plz.

BlackHornet

Irenicus went into hell(or more accurately The Abyss) voluntarily? Strange guy. But considering there isn't the ever handy essence of Bhaal to draw him in I guess it had to happen some way.

Pretty good.

Well that was ok. Shame about Bodhi though. Nothing really wrong here. Good chapter

good chapter.

Oh, by the way Tiax is a gnome, but that doesn't really matter to much. Irenicus was a little too emotional IMO, too much like the one in the novel *shudders*

Sorry for griping and all, I just hate giving one line revews. Good job.

Great fic as always, this is one of my favorites.

heh. Great stuff. Good attention to detail and it's always nice to see the odd grisly death. Keep it up.

hmm, Aren't you revealing Bodhi's history kind of early, I mean she hasn't been an elf for some time now, and it's not like the whole 'Exile' incident is common knowledge. If she was that careless with her lifestory people might find out what the REAL purpose of the guild war was, then they'd have a whole lot more than shadow theives to worry about.

Well, great writing style and attention to detail as usual. I see yor taking the stylish route through the game, Firkraag, the Keep etc. Personally I'm more of a Reijek hidesman/Renal Blodscalp/ Spellhold type person myself, but that's not really a crticism, just commenting on playing style in general. Grat stuff.

hmm... well aside from a few nitpicks it seems a nice enough fanfic. In theory Guen should have died by now, too much time on the material plane, and I can't help but feel adding Entreri was a little to much, especialy since he's so hard to keep IC. but still, 7 chapters, 2 complaints, not too bad.