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| polythenepam128 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseYou captured Vito and Carmella so perfectly, and you wrote so elegantly. I always wondered about their marriage, too; the movies don't really explore Carmella's character but you did, so I thank you for that. Write more Godfather stories, please! |
| Bourgeois Sounds Swell 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseI think I may have said this before, but you should really update this! It's one of the better things I've read on this site. |
| Consumer Product 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseI love love love your style of writing. So elegant and very experienced. I'm on this thing constantly looking for a writer to add to alert, or favorites, and your definatly the most worthy of my list! And I loev the Godfather. I love Deniro playing Vito and you portrayed them all so perfectly! Well done! |
| vintage.d0ll 2007-08-23 ch 1, | abuseI really think you should consider continuing this. I really liked it so far. |