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| I-Love-Trunks1 2008-07-14 ch 4,  | abuseI love this story! its great! Update soon |
| iamkagomeiloveinuyasha 2008-06-26 ch 4, | abuseupdate asap please |
| KB22 2008-05-19 ch 4, | abuseHow did they get out? |
| Hellgirl77 2008-05-18 ch 4, | abuseAwesome new chapter! Whew! Wyatt and Chris escaped, that's a relief. But still wondering why Wyatt goes back for Ben. Update Soon! |
| faith bonksie 2008-05-18 ch 4, | abuseOh that was a really good chappy. Good Chris. Please update soon. |
| Blessed Me 2008-05-17 ch 4, | abuseyeah an update! Yeah Christopher saves the day ^__^. Keep up the good work and hope you can update when you have the time -Blessed |
| Hellgirl77 2008-05-16 ch 3, | abuseVery awesome! You've gotta continue this one. It's so good, I wanna see Wyatt go back in time for Ben. I also want to know why he would go back for someone who seems like an asshole. Please Update! |
| WyattxChrisLover 2008-02-06 ch 3, anon. | abusevery good. please keep writing more on this. |
| JustAnAmateur 2007-12-13 ch 3, | abuseUhh...wow...I never thought of such...mature exploit...slave...and blood shed...but on the plus side it's a very fresh story,seeing that you put Chris into it as Wyatt's son,now that's what I call...I don't know what it's call but this is...promising...although a bit predictable...it's still entertaining and I hope to see how you progress it. Goodnight. |
| sn0zb0z 2007-10-12 ch 3, | abuseGreat chapter. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon! |
| JayneyHunter 2007-10-05 ch 3, | abuseinteresting developments... update once your ungrounded (thank god im old enough to not have that). And update your others as well. |
| History Buff 1990 2007-10-03 ch 3, | abuseNice stuff. I can't wait to see how this one turns out, Ben souds like a real shit-head, please kill him at some point, lol. As for the chapter length, I'm not too bothered about it, the content was great, so that's what I'm judging you on here, but don't feel as though you're being scrutinized, your stuff's too good to really be treated like that. Speaking of which, I think I would love to see an update for 'Harder To Breathe' if you could, that story is simply amazing. Once again, great chappie, can't wait to read more, please update something soon, bye. |
| KB22 2007-10-03 ch 3, | abuseChris is safe for now, thank you. Ben is messed up in the head. I hope Chris softens him up a little bit! |
| Skittles441 2007-10-02 ch 3, | abuseHow dare Benjamin say Christopher is wea, I mean he's only two! I love it, I love it. Can't wait for you to update this story and your other story, Percy Perry Christopher Halliwell. I'm sorry to here about you being grounded, what's it like? I've never been grounded in my life(lol, I know what your thinking) Anways I look forward to 10/15 when your ungrounded so that you can update to your hearts content! Skittles!! -__- |
| Blackangle2011 2007-10-02 ch 3, | abuseit was good but it was really short. |