I love this. How although at the time of this Edmond is still in jail but still nobler than Fernand who's been made a count.

I'm very glad to see you spelled Edmond's name right - so many people spell it with a "u"!

The book is not just a book between me and my mother - it's a person, and a truly amazing person at that *huggles Edmond*

I thought that this was excellent! I recently watched the movie, and decided to check out some fanfics...I'm glad I chose this one! The word choice, the emotions, were perfect. You caught the character, and that is often a hard thing to do, especially in a story as deep as this one. Great job.
Kings to you.

this is so well writen i love the way that you tried to stay with the style of the book yet gave it your own twist. Very deep and thoughtful.

Alice

I've heard it said that guilty consciences never sleep. I think this story captures that well. He is trying so hard to justify himself, and yet cannot. He only succeeds in making himself feel more guilty. He calls himself a coward, and in the end, his ultimate fate showed that as well. Good story and a fine attempt to get into Fernand's head.

This is really good. Poor Dantes. You really got into Ferdiand's (sp?) head, and got an undertone of pity for Dantes at the same time. Awesome, awesome job!

That was so good! you captured Mondego's attitude and personality perfectly.
Bravo