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Hekateras 2/28/11 . chapter 3
"My hands smell like tea and my clothes smell like tea and my room smells like tea and my…"

Hehe, spot-on characterisation. I could just picture him saying that. :D I love your prose and descriptions, you're relaying a serious and deep subject matter without taking yourself too seriously. A wonderful mix of humour and profoundness.
choppychop 7/30/10 . chapter 1
I loved it! Small and beautiful.
Knit.pump 11/26/07 . chapter 7
Just read your profile out of curiosity and do not worry. I too am going mad with joy with the new Book of Avatar and they were doing well here in the UK boradcasting the episodes but now I don't know when they will be back O_O its OH SO HORRIBLE!

But back onto topic, I loved these shorts, especially "It All Started With". Tbh, I prefer the ones you write where Zuko is older and the comedy in It All Started With was perfect and suited the humour in the series. Iroh ftw! Everyone loves his metaphors and I'm sure Zuko is missing them during his time of great power too.

You've probably succeeded in luring me into the the world of Avatar fanfics :P
Anawey 11/16/07 . chapter 7
He learns! Yay. I like this chapter.
YFate 11/14/07 . chapter 7
Loved it. You have an excellent grasp of the individual characters and write with a delicate touch that flows smoothly. I appreciate the insights into the various relationships between the characters. I look forward to more.
Piratess-Bell 11/14/07 . chapter 7
That was amazing...

I loved it. The last line really got me. So very true.

Zuko has acted like that for so long...

Again, I loved it. Can't wait for more.

-Bell
Zaz9-zaa0 11/13/07 . chapter 7
Poor Grandma... XD

Love the take on Mai/Zuko shipping, though! :)
NotReal401 11/3/07 . chapter 6
Aw.Uber love. So great. :)
storm-of-insanity 10/27/07 . chapter 6
I love these one-shots. They're really well written. I especially like chapter 3.
Zaz9-zaa0 10/24/07 . chapter 6
Oi, it's been ages since I read this category of fictions...

And I'm more impressed than ever-before. :)
Piratess-Bell 10/24/07 . chapter 6
Oh, this was so great. Iroh is my favorite Avatar charactor and I'm very glad to see a great story like this one. Lil' Zuko was adorable, Azula: evil as always. I like how you wrote for Lu Ten, he seemed very realistic. Congrats on a job wonderfully done!

Keep Writing,

-Piratess-Bell
Karoshi Note 10/21/07 . chapter 6
I enjoyed the "It started all with" the most, but "The Price" is my favourite. Great drabbles, w00t!
Anawey 10/21/07 . chapter 6
Azula bites? Uh-oh. I ain't goin anywhere near the little demon, then, cause I highly doubt she bites as gently as my kitten. :D
Bayleef14 10/20/07 . chapter 6
Well written Avatar stories are rare indeed, and your writing shines like a gem. These are perhaps the best drabbles I have come across in any fandom; telling a rich story in just a few words is a true art form. I love the way you portray the characters so accurately - Azula is such a little terror! I especially enjoyed seeing Lu Ten and Iroh interact. I look forward to any future drabbles you write!
Luiz4200 10/20/07 . chapter 6
Good chapter. May I suggest a story showing Zuko telling Iroh about the Marzipan incident and the Dragon of the West telling Ozai and Ursa later?
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