Reviews for Preserving Brilliance

yayme2012 2008-05-27 ch 1,	abuseI like the idea so far...
Ember Nickel 2007-09-21 ch 4,	abuseYou have some good ideas here. I thought you used far too many ...s, however. Just a nitpicky thing.
Ember Nickel 2007-08-24 ch 3,	abuseErrgh. That's a disturbing finish. But it was emotionally impacting, so well done.
Ember Nickel 2007-08-23 ch 2,	abuseNice. (By the way, it's usually "Prologue" or "Prolog": just a heads up.)
Ember Nickel 2007-08-22 ch 1,	abuseI'd like to read this one.