I'm only going to answer one question. I don't think Naruto and Sakura are overpowered because they aren't really any omre powerful than canon when not in their Denpa Henkan form.

Sequal? Please have it out soon.

Great story, but am I correct in assuming that the sequal you had been debating on during the story isn't actually going to become a thing?

What is the sequel of this story?

Whats the second arc?

Can You Make The Second Ark Soon Please?

To Faves.

cool story

Great story so far! :) Also does Kyuubi say 'Yeees' like Megatron from the old Beast Wars cartoon?

Will you make a sequel already!

FAVES.

This has gotten just so awful. I can't stand it. I'm sorry. I hate bashing on peoples hard work, but really, this thing needs a whole new classification. For those who read the reviews first, beware, I doubt this will be your cup of tea either...

Could you please link us some pictures of of the EM Wave humans and Kyuubi!

great fic. i see you put starforce 2 and 3 in the fic now

Good introduction.

"“Yelling only makes the Card Force system work, if it made techniques easier to use, Genins would look a little more stupider using techniques out of their league.”"

More stupider doesn't make too much sense by the way.

A few suggestions I have... And you did great on the detail, you'll get better at ordering it and making it more comprehensible over time, pretty good so far though.

- Sasuke should become Rouge more, and perhaps have Gemini taken from him similar to how the others lost their EM bodies to some degree (whether or not they can still transform) in the game.

- Follow the game's system a bit less, try harder to mix both genres, while also making it your own. This one is a must. You introduced a lot of new information in this chapter, which might be why it seems jumbled. Focus on trying to take it one step at a time.

I can't remember my other suggestions unfortunately. I haven't played the third game yet, but I've read a walkthrough on it so I get the basic gist of it. Good thing I did too, before reading this, na? You did good on the dialogue, I only see a little room for improvement - as in try to be more specific about who's saying what - there was only one time I became confused.

One other suggestion I just thought of - it wasn't in my original ones - try to come up with some new EM bodies, and/or at least note how being unable to do much is affecting the other shinobis. Of course they still have a purpose, seeing as there are other shinobis from other nations and whatnot, but still... Meh. XD Maybe disregard this suggestion.

You did quite well considering it was a tad jumbled in the beginning, but you seem to have caught onto a pace near the end. Not sure how fond of a cliffhanger like a battle between Naruto and Sakura I am, but... I can go with it. :)

Overall - decent. Not as good as some of Pudgypudge's stuff, but nonetheless. It's getting a little closer and stuff. :o

Continue the good work and please update soon