This is so cool. I love how Lea becomes the sarcastic Axel we all know and love.

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OK, maybe just know.

Emyx

It's nice to read something just for Axel/Lea, Roxas hogs all the attention from Axel doesn't he? XD It was beautifully written and well constructed, but no grammatical errors there were spacing ones.

Such as the spots of, “Can you just tell me what the hell you’re talking about? All you ever do when you come in here is ask me the same questions over and over, and I always have the same answers. You won’t explain yourself, and you only speak in riddles. Would you quit being so damn confusingand tell me what’s going on here?”

And then this spot right here. "The kaleidoscope was spinning faster and faster, all the memories inside fading into one another, twisting, turning and reforming, all going far toofast for him to keep up."

Other then that the story is very captivating and went very fluently.