i just watched the movie 4 the 1st time last night, and i think this would make a beautiful sequel! i thought it was rly sweet, i luved reading it!

SHE'S GOT HIS EYES! AW!

wo! loved it muchly! :D

in all brutal honesty, it seemed a tad rushed and a wee jumpy, but the story itself was amazing and i loved the plot idea - brilliant!

would love to read more!

XxoxX

just saw the video on youtube

This is getting good I'm only on the frist Story I saw this on youtube and you did a good job with the video to the story.

i love this story

so god!!

way to great! i feel like such a slacker for not reading these sooner

AWSOME TO THE MAX!!

Wow, I wasn't expecting that. This is good.

-K.R.

Aww, she DOES love him! This is cute! I like David, good character. Named after David Bowie, perhaps?

-K.R.

Thank you for your wonderful story.
May you find life good to you.
~Ceilidh

If you could see me right now I would be standing and clapping - nicely done Phantom.

Sorry to hear about your father - I'm hoping for the best for you.

~SA~

That was a good ending to the story.

Beautiful and amazing! Incredibly well written and in character! I loved the new characters as well...Excellent work!