Do I detect a Dragonball Z reference? AshGohan?

Just wanted to say great so far..but I know that he's totally alive.. Ash would never die any other way than old age.. and btw it's cool how you coincidentally made his birthday the same as mine september 27th... nice

Yay! Ash isn't dead :) I'm so happy for that.. but great chapter. About to read on now.. (:

Why do I get the feeling that, that was Ash? O_o but he's dead... right? guess I'll find out :)

I know I am very, very late xD but I just found this & the first chapter is excellent :) time for chapter two. *I'll be reviewing some chapters :)

This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.

Haha found this fic anxd ive only read chapter 1 but i was surprised when it said september 27 thats my birthday aswell :p i hope it gets even better as i read on

hehe the last part was a bit funny

Oh My God. You are an AMAZING writer. You should write real books, becuase you are outstanding. You should definetly send this to the Pokemon company!

Oh. My. God. I was crying this is such a sad and moving chapter. You are an amazing writer and you should sen this to the Pokemon company

on the whole best story i've read so far!

Incredible story. I wish they would make a movie like this.

I agree with ya meowth! hahaha! a good story doesn't end without Team Rocket doing something stupid! he he he!

great but you could've changed the ending

aw! i really loved this story! i really liked the way that you ended it. it made me laugh so hard! i also liked how straightforward Ash was. xD too funny. Your writing skills are so unique and just wonderful! x] awesome story.