Reviews for Naiveness
mahoushoujocore 12/4/12 . chapter 2
I loved this. It's sweet. Both sweet as on cute and sweet as in totally awesome!
Gnarled Bone 5/9/12 . chapter 2
I got this stupid grin on my face and I can't wipe it off D

anyways, amazing fic, I loved it.
Raistlin7 11/30/11 . chapter 2
Sweet fluff

I first chalked the thrid hand up to "Oh, the writer got confused... oh well." and then my eyes went big, when it was Stars hand!

Yes, I can very well imagine Raven brooding over the kiss the whole day and not noticing that Star might have entered her room again.

Especially love the last sentence *gggg*
tears of the soul 12/31/09 . chapter 2
Oh my, Star is full of randomness. And Raven, its fine to be naive
Dr. F. M. Obsesser 11/20/08 . chapter 2
I have exams as well tomorrow, but really, after reading this, I don't think I'll be doing any more studying. :) Very sweet and highly amusing: nice job.
RavenRoth1000 11/13/08 . chapter 2
._. update now. x3
The Original GGRain 11/12/08 . chapter 2
aww ended when it was getting good! RIGHT MORE PLZ!
The Original GGRain 11/12/08 . chapter 1
rade! XD
countwes 11/3/08 . chapter 2
lol "engined" LAWL
Katie Jane 10/1/08 . chapter 1
It may have been nonsense to you but I liked it! If this is nonsense, then more of it please!
xxxRed Ravenxxx 9/24/08 . chapter 1
well it was short granted but funnyand still a good fic if i didnt like it youd know heh
Alphawolf69 9/17/08 . chapter 2
Cool to see this updated *grins*

Starfire being the knowledgeable/seductive one here makes me laugh.
Daryl 9/12/08 . chapter 2
this is a great story
BlackFireBird 7/13/08 . chapter 2
That was... incredibly random, really. But it worked. Quite well. :)
Val-Creative 7/12/08 . chapter 2
You are not going to fail. I wish you luck! XP For your experimenting, you are doing quite well. I've always favored shorter and sharper sentences anyway. Can't wait to see where this goes with our girls.

Val
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