You've been blessed with a review from Meranii.

Yes, that sounds incredibly cocky, but I rarely ever review stories.

I was roaming through Zexion/Demyx fan fictions, losing hope that I could find a story that would actually either interest me or touch me.

Yours actually did both.

I was sucked in as soon as I read the first sentence of this story. Your vocabulary is amazing and the sentences flow very well. I adore how it's tragic, but at the same time it's not.

Does that make sense?

Certainly added to my favorites, I can tell you that.

I loved it! Demyx's line: "If I have no heart, why does this hurt so much?" That alone made my breath hitch. Your writing is all so beautiful; the story and the poetry!

This was beautiful. Keep writing!

Gorgeous! Just gorgeous!
Keep writing!
^^