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Reviews For: Road To Recovery

TheoneandonlyKaorin
2008-03-29
ch 2,
abuseI bet that guy is his son.
Tiger5913
2007-09-23
ch 2,
abuseAhh, an OC. A romantic interest, perhaps? Hmm, or perhaps he's nothing more than just a connection to her past. That would be nice, since we don't get much background information on dear Jane. What the hell was up with him spelling his name out so slowly as if she's retarded or something? Unless he's one of those anal-retentive people that demands perfect pronounciation of his name. Hmm, I certainly hope that he won't delay her intended quest to meet Kenji, though, since she is seeking guidance and a way to cope with some of her mental turmoil. Either way, I'm very intrigued with where her journey will take her. So with that said, please update soon! ^_^
Indigo Siren
2007-08-23
ch 1,
abuseThat was an enjoyable chapter, which I thought handled well with the dreams, or should I say nightmares, and an uncertain reality for our very leopard woman. Good descriptions set the scene and I definitely love your characterisation. I think Shina isn't tough all the time. I look forward to see more of this!
Tiger5913
2007-08-22
ch 1,
abuseInteresting... I didn't think Jane was the type to be... how you say, haunted and disturbed by trauma, but this is a very interesting angle. :) I look forward to reading more of this story.
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