Wow ... why does this not have more reviews? This was one of the most beautiful FMA fics I've ever read, and you actually kept Ed and Winry in character! Just the way you wrote made the scenes play out in my head ... so much detail, but not over-descriptive ... you are incredibly talented! I'll probably be reading this over and over again for awhile ... ^.^

~Tsuki

Oh Wow.
You are super talented!
This is great work!
I love it!

wow! that was really awesome!!

Aw! That was really sweet. I could actually imagine Ed saying that he never ever wanted to kill someone.
It also occurred to me; why can't Ed ever fix his arm with alchemy? He can change the shape of the automail into a knife.

Very good first FMA fic!!

That was beautiful and very emotional. I love how you captured Edward's feelings just right. Please write another one shot.