Very nice. I like how you explained Cloud's silly side. Most people just don't get that the real Cloud isn't "emo" at all.

OMG. I KNOW. CLOUD IS SO NOT EMO. D:

Post Aeris's death he's emo, but there's perfect reasoning behind that. :D This fic was so adorable. Really, really fantastic honestly. I love it!

- Aeris

omg. yes. yes. yes . yes!

finally someone who agrees with me that cloud isn't supposed/meant to be the angsty /emo person he is often depicted around the fandom and, sadly, in AC and spin-offs of the original FFVII game. Oh my gosh. Words fail me to describe how much your fic made me GUSH. I resisted many attempts to jut a finger at the screen and go "YES YES! THIS IS CLOUD! THIS IS THE CLOUD I REMEMBERED SO FONDLY IN THE CANON FFVII GAME! THE SAME CLOUD THAT RODE THAT STUPID CHOCOBO AND LOOKED LIKE A FOOL! AND THE SAME ONE THAT ONE "LET'S MOSEY" AND ON SO MANY ACCOUNTS MADE ME ROFL WITH ALL HIS WEIRD COMMENTS AND GOOFY ACTIONS!"

I loved you so much for managing to see beneath all that ice he's around his facade, for managing to capture that genuine side to him so accurately in a fic, and for allowing aerith - the warm lovely lady she is - to be the one to see through all that and remind us fans that Cloud really in the end, is still that goofy, overgrown, mixed - up kid.

Nobody could EVER forget that chocobo scene of Cloud springing into the air like a two year old.

And you did just that - capturing him so perfectly in here. A million kudos - you deserve all of it.

aw, this is soo cute! x3 Cloud's not that emo, and he's certainly a cute dork. xD

He certainly wasn't her Cloud.

Apparently not! I've been reading your stories for a while and they are adorable, through and through! They're so deep and give insight into the characters! It's amazing, really. Write more stuff. Now. Right now. Hahah. ^^ -Miss Aerith-

Oh my. . .I don't think I've laughed so hard all day. The image of Cloud on the chocobo doing his victory dance. . . priceless! You're right though, people tend to forget about how goofy and weird Cloud can be- and that's part of what makes him such a lovable character, not just his angstiness. I really enjoyed this fic!

lol! "Emo my **!" This was so cute and funny! I seriously loved it!

Wow. This is not only amazingly written, but everyone is also so in-character. This story like like an enhanced scene from the game itself. Finally, I love how you're able to capture the other side of Cloud, the side most people don't or won't see. Again, wow, I literally have no criticism.

That#s it! I'm going to the chocobo races in an attempt to catch a glimpse of Cloud's **!
lol
Really cute story. Loved the image of a hyper Cloud!
~Beeria

Really nice interpretation of Cloud. I also love what you've done with Aeris. It's a very real story, it rings very true.

I agree with you I like goofy Cloud.

Aww...

Dorky Cloud is awesome. And this was.. really.. really cute. I loved it. Great portrayal of Aerith's feelings for Cloud, and explanations for it...

Cloud should definitely have been more like this in Advent Children. ;D

This is so cute.

Aww! This was really sweet! Yeah, I really miss dorky Cloud. Why couldn't they make these flashbacks for AC? XD Anyway, much love for ya!