 Serria 2007-08-22 . chapter 1Yay, a Wedy story! I'm a Wedy fanatic and I don't think she gets nearly enough love. Kudos to you just for writing this. XD
I like how you made it so raw. Wedy is bottling in her anger, but it still seeps out. Your style is neat and clean, no obvious typos or anything that I saw, so good job!
To be nitpicky (and this is irrelevant mostly to fanfiction), Wedy and Aiber didn't meet L until he called them during the Yotsuba case. Also, according to the story, they stayed with Light to find the new Kira a while longer before they left for home and he offed them. But yeah, I know you took creative licenses and that's totally cool, too.
I'm still so happy that there's another Wedy fic! :D Nice going. |