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Incarnate009
2008-03-13 . chapter 1
*victory dance* I finally found one!! *stares* Um...Nobody saw me dancing...right? O_O Where was I? ...Oh yeah...T_T L~!! I like the fic. Nice twist with Wedy and Aiber knowing about Light being Kira. It sux that they had to die. T_T Aiber's funny as hell! More plz. ^^ (blame teh pixie stix)
Sirius Lee Brilliant
2007-08-22 . chapter 1
God, as as soon as she opened the coffin, I burst out bawling. I'm pathetic.

Great job.
Serria
2007-08-22 . chapter 1
Yay, a Wedy story! I'm a Wedy fanatic and I don't think she gets nearly enough love. Kudos to you just for writing this. XD

I like how you made it so raw. Wedy is bottling in her anger, but it still seeps out. Your style is neat and clean, no obvious typos or anything that I saw, so good job!

To be nitpicky (and this is irrelevant mostly to fanfiction), Wedy and Aiber didn't meet L until he called them during the Yotsuba case. Also, according to the story, they stayed with Light to find the new Kira a while longer before they left for home and he offed them. But yeah, I know you took creative licenses and that's totally cool, too.

I'm still so happy that there's another Wedy fic! :D Nice going.
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