This was simply excellent. You have created a scene so realistic and palpable, I felt like I was reliving it with her. You have woven your words together beautifully, capturing Calleigh, her panic and her resolute strength. Kudos for a strong piece of writing.

Oh, poor Cal. :( The one thing that should help relax her ends up being the one thing that reminds her of what happened earlier and nearly breaks her. And how very Calleigh, to force herself to face it until she conquers it.

Great job. :)

Beautiful!

Nice, very nice. Good use of a prompt word. It's very realistic that Calleigh would have panic attacks after her brush with death. But I like seeing her fight it - that's the Calleigh I love.

Nice job.

That was beautiful, Becs. Perfectly paced and very honest. Completely in character, as always :)

Love Tricki,
xoxoxox

Hey,

I like this please keep going, I always felt that they could have expanded on this story more.

SandyLee

THIS WAS VERY GOOD, BUT A TAD BIT CONFUSING! IS IT FINISHED? WHATS GOING ON WITH CALLIEGH? I WANNA KNOW MORE *BANGS HEAD ON TABLE, REPEATEDLY* I. JUST. WANNA. KNOW. MORE...

Wow! Loved that! More like those please! ;)