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XxcharmedoholicsxX
2008-07-22
ch 1,
abuseAw, really liked it, the song goes nicely with it. Really liked the focus on the braclet and Chris' involvement in it. Gotta love the Chris/Leo dynamics. Another chapter...? *looks on hopefully* :) x
WellxWisher
2008-01-27
ch 1,
abuseAww, that's sweet. I like it. Who sings that song?
Adorelo
2007-08-27
ch 1,
abuseI liked the plot, and the characteristion, very well done. The only thing I didn't like was the script format. I have actually seen stories taken off here becuase of incorrect formatting, so be careful. I'd hate to see someone so talanted get thier work removed.
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Jodie
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dgeo98
2007-08-23
ch 1,
abuseI liked it. It seems that Chris knew that Leo was following him. Is there going to be another part?
Briankrause
2007-08-23
ch 1,
abusehey great fic, I know what you mean, my muse sometimes bugs me too, little too much, but I try to ignore her much as I can. lol. Its very interesting, but near the end, you kind of confused me though, from the part.

“I wanna make it right
That is the way
To turn my life around
Today is the day
Am I the type of guy
Who means what I say?” Chris turned to were Leo was standing.

see I think you kind of mixed the lyrics with Chris's speech.
piperloveleoalways
2007-08-22
ch 1,
abusehmm nice you should write another chapter showing Leo i dont know maybe thanking Chris or confronting him as to why or how he got it for him. just a thought anyway i really like it.
charmedrocks
2007-08-22
ch 1,
abuseit was really sad that they didnt go into the charm bracelet more. good job
charmedgrl4ever
2007-08-22
ch 1,
abusekonnichi wa

It was a bit choppy, but sweet. Fluff isn't my thing, but that's all right. After all, Bianca isn't your thing; but you still read our fics. So - I read this. :) It was really sweet.

Zaijen
-Shan-
Witty-Kate
2007-08-22
ch 1,
abuseaww that was sweet
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