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| XxcharmedoholicsxX 2008-07-22 ch 1, | abuseAw, really liked it, the song goes nicely with it. Really liked the focus on the braclet and Chris' involvement in it. Gotta love the Chris/Leo dynamics. Another chapter...? *looks on hopefully* :) x |
| WellxWisher 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseAww, that's sweet. I like it. Who sings that song? |
| Adorelo 2007-08-27 ch 1, | abuseI liked the plot, and the characteristion, very well done. The only thing I didn't like was the script format. I have actually seen stories taken off here becuase of incorrect formatting, so be careful. I'd hate to see someone so talanted get thier work removed. Kisses Jodie x |
| dgeo98 2007-08-23 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. It seems that Chris knew that Leo was following him. Is there going to be another part? |
| Briankrause 2007-08-23 ch 1, | abusehey great fic, I know what you mean, my muse sometimes bugs me too, little too much, but I try to ignore her much as I can. lol. Its very interesting, but near the end, you kind of confused me though, from the part. “I wanna make it right That is the way To turn my life around Today is the day Am I the type of guy Who means what I say?” Chris turned to were Leo was standing. see I think you kind of mixed the lyrics with Chris's speech. |
| piperloveleoalways 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abusehmm nice you should write another chapter showing Leo i dont know maybe thanking Chris or confronting him as to why or how he got it for him. just a thought anyway i really like it. |
| charmedrocks 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abuseit was really sad that they didnt go into the charm bracelet more. good job |
| charmedgrl4ever 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abusekonnichi wa It was a bit choppy, but sweet. Fluff isn't my thing, but that's all right. After all, Bianca isn't your thing; but you still read our fics. So - I read this. :) It was really sweet. Zaijen -Shan- |
| Witty-Kate 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abuseaww that was sweet |