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RavenGirlie
2009-08-24 . chapter 6
I really hope you continue this soon. I know how trying full time jobs can get so you have my full sympathy. Good luck! I loved your first story to this one, and am enjoying this one too. I don't know much about fortune telling but the way you presented the information worked very well.
SisterFreaks
2009-05-27 . chapter 6
Woh! This story is so cool! And the amount of detail that has been put into it (with the supernatural stuff) makes it really interesting. Just be careful. I've noticed that you sometimes repeat yourself within a couple of paragraphs. BUT, otherwise, this story is really well written.
You should try reading 'Supernatural Entanglements' by flacedice, & 'The Seer' by tsubaki-dono, both of which are very well written *xHolic* stories (nicely detailed).
I'll send this to you as a message and review so that you'll see my recommendations.
Thank you and please update soon!
CrazyShenanigans
2009-02-02 . chapter 6
I just love this story! It's so amazing! I just can't wait for you to continue. I know how hard it is juggling life and what you enjoy doing so I won't scream at you to continue. Just take things at your own pace and try not to end up in the corner eating your own hair.
Anon
2008-07-30 . chapter 6
Look forward to the chapter when you get around to it. I'm sure it will be worth the wait. Good luck with the rest of your summer.
Nikkler
2008-07-30 . chapter 6
No worries. Take all the time you need to write a good chapter. I have faith in what ever you write. I hope you get your vacation. Everything will work out. Huggles
Nikkler
Ronin101
2008-07-29 . chapter 6
Don't get discouraged! Keeping quality writing up when you are so busy and everyone clamoring for quick chpt turn around times - it's hard! I love your story and I have been reading this story line of yours for years now. I would rather you keep yourself sane and healthy (happy/healthy authors = happy readership!). Remember, greater the whining, better the cliff hanger you wrote. ;-)
Ronin
Haruka-Hime
2008-07-21 . chapter 5
I wonder who the help is...
Shi-chan
2008-07-07 . chapter 5
Well? I sure hope there is more to come. I really like this...
Peayitforward
2008-04-27 . chapter 5
I'm loving this story. You've done your homework when it comes to psychics. I'm wondering did you just do research for the story or are you one of us? Yes, I say us because I do the same thing as Duo..sorta, no ghosts for me thank you very much. Way to dangerous and unpredictable. Keep up the good work and please update soon. If you need help with any of the super natural stuff feel free to contact me.
the sadistic homicidal child
2008-03-21 . chapter 5
Woo hoo! Some action, all right! >D But.. .I fink the camera might be a bit busted. :[ But ha! Haha! Having a wonderful time? How cheerful for such a job. XD Please update soon!
Seer Vixion
2008-03-02 . chapter 5
GOSTS...ATTACk... they calling in Heero and the gang? That would be FUN... hehehe


~vixi
GundamPilot03
2008-02-29 . chapter 5
More please. I really liked all of this.
Aacire
2008-02-25 . chapter 5
Yay! You updated! This chapter was good, poor Heero, he seems so lonely. I hope that you update soon because I can't wait to see how Hilde and Duo get out of this one! I'm curious who they would call to get them out of there. Update soonl, Asta!
Dragon77
2008-02-25 . chapter 5
I Love it chapter 5 was great and I know chapter 6 will be even better so update soon.
nalamacleod
2008-02-25 . chapter 5
Who they gonna call, ghostbusters, buts thats them? Poor Heero, it hasn't even been a full day and he misses Duo that much.
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