WoW. That's all, just wow. Can't wait for the next installment! Bring it soon!

Aw. That was really sweet. I loved the ending.

I totally know what you mean about writing in Edward's perspective. Sometimes he's just a lot more interesting. I don't know. I really like how you write him though.

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

hahah I loved it although I wish Bella would have stayed with Jake and Edward was just kinda like oh well a love lost, yah know? Anywhos um... You might want to change the reading to Teen. I am sorry but I would not want my sister who is not of teen age to be reading the kiss, STEAMY! hahah. I am going to get my hot wings and finish drooling over people.

oh really liked it...so sweet...and the song was prefect

baci

Marta

loved it!