Not bad, albeit a bit short. You might want to format it more like a poem, because that's basically what it is. Or maybe as a song/lyrical poem. It has a sort of beat to it. Anyways, I liked it.

CC!!! *sniiiiiiiiiiff* Why must you do this to me? Now.. I.. gotta... WAAAAHHH!! *cries Soun/Usagi style with waterfalls gushing out of her eyes* Still it was very deep. I feel like this sometimes, wondering what is the purpose of all my chaos. *huggles* great story by-the-by! Still waiting for the next instalment of Bliss! Gotcha-bagoose!

::Gives Ryoga a hug:: Poor Ryoga...you start school next week?! Lucky! I started two days ago...sucks.