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| Doc 2008-07-10 ch 4, anon. | abuseWOW! i am in tears right now. As a girlfriend of a man in the Army, this really hits close to home. Very well written. Great job! |
| DeadlyRedRose 2008-07-03 ch 3, | abusegreat story and chapter.Reading th letter trevor wrote put me in tears.Im still crying |
| overactive imagination 15 2008-04-01 ch 4, | abuseGreat job on your dialogue and nailing Roxy's character. Very moving and sad for her. Would hate for them to really kill off Travor. |
| criminally charmed 2008-03-30 ch 4, | abuseOK, if the goal of this was to have me bawling my eyes out, it worked. The fact that I have seen the actor who plays Trevor do a great death scene makes it all too easy to imagine. I know it has been a while but I hope you haven't abandoned this story. |
| IloveNickJonas 2008-01-08 ch 4, | abuseThis is a good story.. It has suspence and all the things i love to have in a story |
| Jules 2007-10-24 ch 4, anon. | abuseI hate you! *wipes away her tears and sniffles* You better make things right gosh darnit! My husband is going over to the sand box.. I need a happy ending please. |
| Miss Meggie 2007-09-24 ch 4, | abusei liked this! |
| PrInCeSsFBi 2007-09-19 ch 2, | abuseUm...Drew Fuller who plays Trever his eyes are green not brown sorry that just always annoys me anwhoo i like it |
| Alex 2007-09-07 ch 4, anon. | abuseThis is a wonderful story, please update ASAP. I can't wait to see what happens next. P.S. It would be really cool if it was like with Sherwood and they just thought he was dead. hint hint, wink wink ;) |
| furbypksfurby 2007-09-03 ch 4, | abuseFantastic chapter. The character development of Roxy is outstanding!! I can definately hear her say all of those things... please keep writing |
| palex 4ever 2007-08-29 ch 3, | abuselove the letter |
| Shawn-n-Bell 2007-08-26 ch 3, | abuseOmg! This is amazing, you write really well. I love it. It made me cry and then I felt weird for crying. haha. I love it so much..its going straight to favs! |
| furbypksfurby 2007-08-25 ch 3, | abuseThis is an extremely well writen story. It is very sad and extremely thought provoking. You have done an excellent job of defining who Trevor was. Thank you for such an outstanding story. |
| DramaLexy 2007-08-25 ch 3, | abusewow, this is really really good. really sad, but really good |
| Nichole 2007-08-23 ch 3, anon. | abusethat was incredably sad. *tear* *sniff*i love tim mcgraws song too. |